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All Deviations
All Deviations


Gravity

The rain washes all away
But it doesn’t reach the depths of my disgrace
With futile breathes
My soul treks forward

With each step my soul falls
Dragging along each puddle of mud
Each rock cuts through
Each pebble scratches my surface

The deeper I plummet
The more pressure that builds
It crushes, and consumes my being
Forever buried under its weight

Such pain and loss
Leaves my lungs empty
No where to go, no one to see
No one to hear my shrill screams.

Each moment of loss
Each pound of pressure felt
Buried under others lives
Its this feeling of suffocation
that cripples my form.
©2008 ~Swifts
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Just kind of felt like writing something. Too bad its all tragic
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~Maegloth:iconMaegloth: May 4, 2008, 7:41:12 PM
something is better than nothing, even if it is tragic :D
rather read tragic poetry than stuff about unicorns and rainbows and other happy bullshit :XD:

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"Squeeze me baby, 'till the juice runs down my leg. The way you squeeze my lemon I, I'm gonna fall right out of bed!"

Yeah, that's right. I said it.
Led Zeppelin = :headbang: